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      • Oh dear! I was not suggesting that you change your poem ! Only that both expressions seem to describe the same desire to protect one’s most precious possessions – family! I wonder if there are similar expressions in other cultures too! I enjoyed your poem , just as it is!

  1. I was going to say something about a man’s home being a castle before I was interrupted by political correctness but your lovely haiku paints volumes of images about warmth and security and love. Nicely done.

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